Yakezie.com - Topic: Crafting The Perfect About Page

maria@moneyprinciple on Crafting The Perfect About Page

Sun, 11 Aug 2013 23:29:45 +0000

Martin,

I love Paula's 'about' page (Afford Anything) - have a look. I just checked yours out and one way to improve it may be to get rid of some words - still too many, it seems to me. (I am still working on mine so...)

Maria

mbhunter on Crafting The Perfect About Page

Sun, 11 Aug 2013 22:46:18 +0000

For my taste, I usually don't stick around if the first line contains a four-letter word. (I'm also a different generation than you.) But then again, one of my favorite bloggers is J Money, and his blogging is edgy like that.

Cater it to whatever audience you want to target.

martin on Crafting The Perfect About Page

Wed, 07 Aug 2013 14:08:34 +0000

Hey all!

I've been working on trying the perfect about page to attract readers and to convince them to stick around. What would you want to see on an about page? What's yours like? Any tips?

My two about pages are here: http://studenomics.com/about/ or http://kettlebellrebels.com/about-kr/

I would love any feedback.