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8:18 pm
February 16, 2012


Jeff Rose

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posts 574

I absolutely agree.  Maybe it's more important for me since my blog is also a lead magnet for new clients; but my About page is also very highly visited and following Derek Halpern's advice from Social Triggers, I threw 3 newsletter subscription boxes on it and each of them convert. 

Every time I visit a blog for the first time I ALWAYS to the about page.  Always.   Personally, I think your about page should be just as good as some of your best posts on your site, IMHO. 

If you want to see an epic About page, check out Clay Collins:  http://www.clay-collins.com/bl…..-my-story/

 

I think it's the only About page that I've seen that has been Tweeted over 700 times and almost 500 FB shares.   Truly epic. 

 

retireby40 said:

Can you take a look and give me some critique? Don't hold back because I want to improve it. 

If you want my unsolicited advice, here you go….   :)

 

Drop the media.net ads.   I want to read about you not more advertising.  Plus it gives a chance for your readers to click away and never come back. 

 

I would love to see some sort of photos sprinkled throughout the content.   Like an "Exit" sign with your exit strategy discussion. 

 

Honestly, that's about it.  If you ever decide to do an email newsletter, you could always throw in a subscribe box. 

 

Your about page tells a "good story" and that's exactly what it should do.  Laugh

9:14 pm
February 16, 2012


bax

Middle of Lunch

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posts 34

Now THAT is an about page.  Great stuff Jeff, thank you.

9:14 pm
February 16, 2012


bax

Middle of Lunch

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posts 34

Now THAT is an about page.  Great stuff Jeff, thank you.

4:23 am
February 17, 2012


DebtFreeByThirty

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posts 187

I think it must be a pet peeve of mine too. I love about pages. 

 

Like RB40 said, it is the most viewed page I have and I think people have a natural curiosity to know more. Even if I am semi-anonymous I can still give a good idea of what I am about.

4:48 am
February 17, 2012


MoneyBeagle

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posts 1466

OK, I just added to my list that I better make sure that mine is updated.  I should at least make sure that the number of kids I have is up to date!  Smile

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9:26 am
February 17, 2012


retireby40

USA

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Thanks for the feedback Jeff. 

I moved to the who sees ad plugin and haven't figure out how to remove the ads from pages yet. Previously, I only have media.net on my posts, not pages. Will work on it this weekend. 

Good tip about the photos to break it up. 


 

retireby40 said:

Can you take a look and give me some critique? Don't hold back because I want to improve it. 

If you want my unsolicited advice, here you go….   :)

 

Drop the media.net ads.   I want to read about you not more advertising.  Plus it gives a chance for your readers to click away and never come back. 

 

I would love to see some sort of photos sprinkled throughout the content.   Like an "Exit" sign with your exit strategy discussion. 

 

Honestly, that's about it.  If you ever decide to do an email newsletter, you could always throw in a subscribe box. 

 

Your about page tells a "good story" and that's exactly what it should do.  Laugh

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9:27 am
February 17, 2012


retireby40

USA

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Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on it this weekend. Ugh… another thing on the todo list. Wink

Shannyn @FrugalBeautiful.com said:

I am by NO means an authority on this…lord knows my about page could be cleaner and improved. I think you did a great job of making yourself personable I like that you listed life goals!  Perhaps even a picture or two would be a good idea- if not of you/your family but even just a visual representation of your goals.

 

The other thing I would suggest is Headers in bigger, bolder text.  "About the Blog" or "Background on the Blog" then "About the Author or Blogger"  just so people know where to look and it makes sense as people scroll down the page..but I really like it, these are just teensy suggestions, overall it's great and it really adds character and uniqueness to your blog! :) 

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11:15 am
February 17, 2012


sensetosave

Indiana

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posts 41

I just updated my about page because of what you wrote. I hope it helps readers get to know me a little better! Might make some more tweaks to it.

11:41 pm
February 17, 2012


maria@moneyprinciple

Manchester, UK

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posts 679

Gosh, mine is so outdated. Should tackle it soon. Thanks for the reminder.

And yes I do like reading about pages – it makes the relationship somehow more personal. It is disappointing when it isn't, I agree.

Maria

12:06 am
February 18, 2012


Super Frugalette

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posts 484

Shannyn @FrugalBeautiful.com said:

I'm not sure if I'm just being silly- but I've been roaming around the interwebs and I've developed a little pet peeve with About Pages.  So many "About" pages aren't really about anything.

 

 Typically someone clicks the About page to learn about the author or the blog specifically- but I've seen over and over again the page contains no identifying or purposeful information that allows readers to get to know the blogger any better…but I feel that even if a blogger is anonymous you can still help your readers get to know you with fun facts that make you seem human, personable and unique.  Sharing fun facts like hobbies, favorite books/tv shoes, marital status or other quirky traits helps you make connections with your readers and help them get to know you without blowing your cover, so why are so many About Pages so darn vague and robotish?

 

  I realize not everyone wants to be "outed" or put up pictures of themselves- but I always get disappointed when I click an About page to get to know even an anonymous blogger a bit better and there's really nothing on there to help me to make a connection or help them stand out from the crowd (with info like favorite books, funny stories, goals, passions, etc.)  at all.    I can't emphasize how many times I've sent an email to a blogger when I find out we have the same favorite tv show or both love Nintendo…even if their blog has nothing to do with either!

 

I just don't find "I've been blogging for 3 years about this because I like it and I hoped to help people," very compelling.  I appreciate fun trivia, personal stories, pictures of pets or your favorite artwork to be wonderfully personal but find many bloggers keep it too vague or "professional."   Am I just being nit picky?
   

I think I am the opposite of you. Before I started blogging, I would find a blog and I found that the writer was all over the place. I often look for information vs. a personality, so I would see something like 30 different categories and then just leave because there was not enough substance for me.

My about page describes my brand and my posts support my brand. Just my 2 cents.

 

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7:46 am
July 31, 2012


Objective Wealth

UK

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posts 71

The first thing I did with my blog was focus on writing the About Page, as I knew it would give me the chance to concretise my aims and goals for my writing, before I set off spewing forth ideas. I still bear it mind with every post, and I have no intention of changing it fundamentally any time soon. 

The about page is your one big chance to get your whole blogging raison d'etre pinned down for anybody who wants to know! Don't waste it.

Drew

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9:32 am
July 31, 2012


LaTisha @YoungFinances

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posts 1715

I tried to keep my about page short and sweet. It includes an opt-in form and links to social profiles. I figure most people want to know "What's in it for me?" when they visit my about page so they don't really care if I have a dog or not. lol

 

With everything they want to know what they are going to get out of the site. Then if they really want to know about me, I include more of my personality in my social networking.

LaTisha 

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8:06 pm
July 31, 2012


Jennifer Lynn

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posts 100

I peek at the About page first if Ive stumbled across a new blog, to establish a potential connection with the author. If it's snoozy and generally not engaging, I don't spend much time sifting through content. There have been instances where an About page has completely blown me away, and I'll dig through the site for hours, absorbing information like a fiend.

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4:17 am
August 1, 2012


MoneyBeagle

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posts 1466

Jennifer Lynn said:

I peek at the About page first if Ive stumbled across a new blog, to establish a potential connection with the author.

I get my connection from their posts.  I often forget all about ever checking the About page.  Interesting that everybody has their different ways of making connections!

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10:37 am
August 1, 2012


Ryan @ Planwise

San Francisco

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posts 62

Thats funny that this thread blew up. We just spruced up our about section to include photos and bios.

 

It was just the CEO and myself because we were the only ones that blogged, but we added the rest of the team members and its coming along nicely.

 

I understand that people want to remain anonymous but I think it allows people to get a more personable connection when they have a better understanding of who's writing they are reading.

Like a mid 20's student vs a early 40's person. As I am in my 20's I would be able to relate to the younger blogger due to our age/life style.

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6:24 pm
August 4, 2012


Club Thrifty

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posts 251

Well, I had been planning on updating our "About Us" page, but this thread frightened me into doing it immediately.Laugh

8:02 pm
August 4, 2012


Wayne

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posts 125

I actually don't click on the About pages too often. If the blogger has great content I will continue to follow him/her and after doing so for a while, you get true understanding of who the person is.

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2:27 pm
August 6, 2012


Flexo

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posts 71

Thanks for the reminder, Shannyn… I refreshed my "about me" page on Consumerism Commentary. 

6:52 pm
September 16, 2012


20s Finances

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posts 1147

I just re-did my about page after thinking about building my personal brand more at FinCon. I'd love some feedback – HONEST feedback is always welcome.

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